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Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:44 am
by Aumaan Anubis
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Critique and comment.

V2:
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Different one:
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Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:48 am
by Zieon Eslador
I always did like that render...

Yellow stands out a bit too much, if it were three colors it wouldn't be as noticeable but with only yellow and white it is way to clear. Cloud is a little too focused, needs more flow.

Still pretty nice seeing as I couldn't ever think of anything to do with that render...

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:47 am
by Aumaan Anubis
Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:39 am
by Remnant Samurai
I also like that render alot.

looking really good have you been using photoshop long?

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:47 pm
by Aumaan Anubis
RaZoR73 wrote:looking really good have you been using photoshop long?
Not really. I used it awhile back, for a couple days.
And now I've used it again, for a couple days.

Anyway...

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Made that one for fun. C&C, as well.

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 12:22 am
by Remnant Samurai
Looks nice :D

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 2:08 am
by NotZachary82
It looks really good. I didn't think you had any talent.

Nice job. I need to catch up with GFX skills.

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:14 pm
by Zieon Eslador
Aumaan Anubis wrote:Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?
Cloud is much better. The blue streaks fit better with the background and help to not focus only on the yellow streaks.

Not going to lie though, probably better than I could do anyway. :)