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Critique and comment.

V2:
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Different one:
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I always did like that render...

Yellow stands out a bit too much, if it were three colors it wouldn't be as noticeable but with only yellow and white it is way to clear. Cloud is a little too focused, needs more flow.

Still pretty nice seeing as I couldn't ever think of anything to do with that render...
Zieon Eslador (1:23:09 AM): I haven't seen Watchmen, but I plan to eventually...
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
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Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?
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I also like that render alot.

looking really good have you been using photoshop long?
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RaZoR73 wrote:looking really good have you been using photoshop long?
Not really. I used it awhile back, for a couple days.
And now I've used it again, for a couple days.

Anyway...

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Made that one for fun. C&C, as well.
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Looks nice :D
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It looks really good. I didn't think you had any talent.

Nice job. I need to catch up with GFX skills.
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Aumaan Anubis wrote:Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?
Cloud is much better. The blue streaks fit better with the background and help to not focus only on the yellow streaks.

Not going to lie though, probably better than I could do anyway. :)
Zieon Eslador (1:23:09 AM): I haven't seen Watchmen, but I plan to eventually...
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
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