This is my 1st task for uni...opinions/suggestions?
V1: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222720740.jpg
V2: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222721311.jpg
V3: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222721417.jpg
CGT Poster Task
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XZodia
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CGT Poster Task
JacksonCougar wrote:I find you usually have great ideas.
JacksonCougar wrote:Ah fuck. Why must you always be right? Why.
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Zieon Eslador
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Re: CGT Poster Task
Looks sick, I don't like the font in any of them but I can get over it. Maybe fade the white line on Sonic's leg?
Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?
Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?
Zieon Eslador (1:23:09 AM): I haven't seen Watchmen, but I plan to eventually...
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
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what do you mean by that?Zieon Eslador wrote:Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?
JacksonCougar wrote:I find you usually have great ideas.
JacksonCougar wrote:Ah fuck. Why must you always be right? Why.
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As in, "Excuse meh for mah newbishness, but what are this Uni you speaks of?"xzodia wrote:what do you mean by that?Zieon Eslador wrote:Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?
I have a feeling I should already know... but I don't.
Zieon Eslador (1:23:09 AM): I haven't seen Watchmen, but I plan to eventually...
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
NotZachary (1:23:15 AM): it has nukes, random things happening, and retards screaming
NotZachary (1:23:19 AM): kinda like MW2
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OwnZ joO
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Re: CGT Poster Task
I think he's talking about the University of Northern Iowa.
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umm no...University of Abertay Dundee (I don't live in America >_>)OwnZ joO wrote:I think he's talking about the University of Northern Iowa.
JacksonCougar wrote:I find you usually have great ideas.
JacksonCougar wrote:Ah fuck. Why must you always be right? Why.
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JacksonCougar
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Re: CGT Poster Task
[V2] Keeps your ideas together, and does not force the mind to "roam" the image too much, which brings be to my second point:
Roaming: you have three distinct focal points in your image far from each other, a usual rule for advertisement posters is you have to grab the attention quickly and get your message across in just a few seconds, people barely glance at a poster for more than a few seconds. I would suggest trying to minimize the background swirls presence, and capitalize on your text and background characters in a more central position, create the background to draw the eye towards your true center-of-focus, the message.
Text: Your text is not immediately registrable and can "blend" into the background too much. I would try creating more contrast between the text and the background image like a glow, brighter colours, or some other method you see fit ;p
Roaming: you have three distinct focal points in your image far from each other, a usual rule for advertisement posters is you have to grab the attention quickly and get your message across in just a few seconds, people barely glance at a poster for more than a few seconds. I would suggest trying to minimize the background swirls presence, and capitalize on your text and background characters in a more central position, create the background to draw the eye towards your true center-of-focus, the message.
Text: Your text is not immediately registrable and can "blend" into the background too much. I would try creating more contrast between the text and the background image like a glow, brighter colours, or some other method you see fit ;p